I really love how you do Rainbow Dash's hair! and I also REALLY like how you drew Fluttershy! she looks like a kid not like a filly but like a teen... and that might not be what you were aiming for...but the hair is done different... and she just looks AMAZING! but I kinda like that idea like how rainbow dash and fluttershy are a couple in there teens and then they start to realize this isn't going to work and became best friends The end!
wait . . . RD hopping!?